02-08-2020, 04:28 AM
Key/Character: Nardlerd/Evan Lockway
Which Event: Nightmare on Sudbury's Streets
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): I have no complaints on response time! 10/10
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The battles were challenging, though were kinda messed with when the EC was getting more health than he needed. Although that's not Hoovy's fault so 10/10!
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): I'm honestly only saying this because Hoovy wants critiques. The story was fine but the event was a bit -too- straight forward. It was just FIGHT and FIGHT and FIGHT AGAIN. It was fun and compelling, don't get me wrong but it could've had some tracking moments- more discoveries. Outside of this? Good even! 8/10
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) Oh for sure. My character got exactly what should come to him. He is quite the dumbass. 10/10.
Overall: 9/10
Any other comments: Give him your events.
Which Event: Nightmare on Sudbury's Streets
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): I have no complaints on response time! 10/10
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The battles were challenging, though were kinda messed with when the EC was getting more health than he needed. Although that's not Hoovy's fault so 10/10!
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): I'm honestly only saying this because Hoovy wants critiques. The story was fine but the event was a bit -too- straight forward. It was just FIGHT and FIGHT and FIGHT AGAIN. It was fun and compelling, don't get me wrong but it could've had some tracking moments- more discoveries. Outside of this? Good even! 8/10
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) Oh for sure. My character got exactly what should come to him. He is quite the dumbass. 10/10.
Overall: 9/10
Any other comments: Give him your events.