Rob

[The Iron Jaw]

Character: Asura Nomont
Which Event: The Lost Magus Arts

Responsiveness: 10/10

Admittedly, a few rl delays amongst party members (myself being a strong perpetrator of such) did in fact slow things down. However, despite this -- the patience exercised throughout the event was something I'm eternally grateful for! Not only were there quick responses, but the responses themselves pertained reverence to every detail from the posts. No one person's post went unacknowledged, with even the small details easily finding incorporation into furthering the plot.

Balance: 8/10

Perhaps it was intentional -- or perhaps accidental. One thing is certain, as a nonmagi PC, the EC definitely floored us first round. I am willing to suspect that no one was prepared for the mechanical augment that the RPB system had in store for all of us! It was remedied accordingly on the fly and incorporated in the story all the same. All in all, nothing of particular concern! I'd say that the balancing truly set in the mood and weight behind the conflict that it could very well mean the demise of the characters pressing on.

Storytelling: 10/10

Much like the acknowledged bit concerning Responsiveness? The storytelling was portrayed through the environment and uncovered in a way that felt organic. Truly entertaining, through and through! What made it better was not only the route of events, but the opportunities that it opened up for the future -- possibilities unexplored, that could open up a new event chain? Change the course of a character's story or outlook? One thing is for certain, it made its mark and will certainly see impact. Solid score here.

Fairness: 8.5/10

There were many ways this could've gone down. All and all -- while the efforts were hard fought between the characters and the event's twists and turns? I do believe it was fair! Though, I suspect that in the future it should be noted that ECs are not affected by instances like CC. Everything else was pretty clean cut, and PAINFULLY close and even. Nothing was gimped from the participants, and seemed more directed towards the story of the event.

Overall: 9/10

I liked this event!
It paid reverence to the RPs posted, to the characters and their persons, their interactions and even their attention to detail.
It allowed the players to choose between bash n' crash or investigative prodding and poking, if one so chose -- and it was all the better for it in my honest opinion.
Though, I think I may have liked to gamble things a bit more with other interactions with rolls.

All in all? 9/10, would recommend

Any other comments:
*stamps Ironjaw's Seal of Approval*