11-28-2020, 01:09 AM
Character: Anastasia pyr Aertas
Which Event: Where the sun never rises
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 10/10 was a little slow, but the time between how long they took and how much was given in the narrate always justified that. They were clearly writing them out on the spot, ergo, 10/10.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 10/10 First event I encountered where NPCs were used. Even though I got my ass beat by 7k bubbles that were shot towards my forehead every second, it was rather fun and new to see. I may try to use NPCs myself now. No doubt to varying degrees of success.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 10/10 Absolutely wonderful story telling. It was all engaging and tied into the next portion of the event. Very well written.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): 10/10 We got more than we asked for.
Overall: 10/10
Any other comments: Barry was obviously a reference to something, but I didn't understand the reference. Secretly, your overall score is 2/10 for not explaining the reference through the event story. Shame!
Which Event: Where the sun never rises
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 10/10 was a little slow, but the time between how long they took and how much was given in the narrate always justified that. They were clearly writing them out on the spot, ergo, 10/10.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 10/10 First event I encountered where NPCs were used. Even though I got my ass beat by 7k bubbles that were shot towards my forehead every second, it was rather fun and new to see. I may try to use NPCs myself now. No doubt to varying degrees of success.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 10/10 Absolutely wonderful story telling. It was all engaging and tied into the next portion of the event. Very well written.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): 10/10 We got more than we asked for.
Overall: 10/10
Any other comments: Barry was obviously a reference to something, but I didn't understand the reference. Secretly, your overall score is 2/10 for not explaining the reference through the event story. Shame!