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Key/Character: Bruno pyr Aertas
Which Event: Where the sun never rises

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Swift enough, it wasn't the fastest in the world but there was no problem with how long it took, especially when I take my wife on events.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The balance was fine, the enemies grew in strength and the last fight was really close R1 with both of us at 10% while R2 ended with a KO from 1 tick of blizzard out of shadowalk instead of me getting the finish.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): This is the best part of the event and it was the focus of it; the story that led both Bruno and Anna to delve further was related to the theme and properly tied to the event title itself. It touched on love, allowed us to play to our strengths and with the bond they both held and it all tied up nicely into a story worth its ending, giving more meaning to what could have been a simple event by hitting a subject that I don't even think you knew about which was conspiring against one another. It was really good.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): We got more than we asked for.

Overall: Very good for a first event. There was just 1 minor mistake but it's due to the guide and was quickly corrected. Even tuning was attempted to be used, which is rare!

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