05-02-2020, 04:29 AM
Key/Character: Elsha/Zion Cai
Which Event: Ancient Temple of Quetzalcoatl
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?):10/10 As fast as the participants responded was the same on the receiving end.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 10/10 it was seemingly balanced when it came to battles, and even the obstacles weren't that bad. Trailing through the environment through the mountain and facing the difficulties of the weather brought in realism.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?) 9/10, I thoroughly enjoyed the idea presented as of seeking out an offering and returning back to the temple. Only reason it isn't a 10/10 is just because I wish that there was more of an obstacle set into the temple for travelers seeking out what the participants did.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?)10/10 If you rolled something after a given amount of damages it made reasonable sense as to why you were punished the way you were considering the roll you made.
Overall: The event was great in it's own way, it didn't last that long considering the objectives, it had a nice plot line connected to esshars events, and it ended in a meaningful way to grow for progress. 10/10
Any other comments: .......... hi
Which Event: Ancient Temple of Quetzalcoatl
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?):10/10 As fast as the participants responded was the same on the receiving end.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 10/10 it was seemingly balanced when it came to battles, and even the obstacles weren't that bad. Trailing through the environment through the mountain and facing the difficulties of the weather brought in realism.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?) 9/10, I thoroughly enjoyed the idea presented as of seeking out an offering and returning back to the temple. Only reason it isn't a 10/10 is just because I wish that there was more of an obstacle set into the temple for travelers seeking out what the participants did.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?)10/10 If you rolled something after a given amount of damages it made reasonable sense as to why you were punished the way you were considering the roll you made.
Overall: The event was great in it's own way, it didn't last that long considering the objectives, it had a nice plot line connected to esshars events, and it ended in a meaningful way to grow for progress. 10/10
Any other comments: .......... hi