07-23-2024, 08:39 PM
Character: Oliphr Ishiko
Which Event: Mini-event - The Line between Faith and Falling
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Very quick- a lot quicker than I could hope for.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): N/A
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): It was short, as it was a mini-event, but for a faith-related event hinging on personal sorrow, the ties one makes with others and how even care and concern for others can be a detriment to oneself- such like the man whose life is dedicated to helping and being concerned for others- it was a wonderful event that played to the key points of the crisis in question.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): N/A, but I will say, the personal development that led to his outcome in faith was a great reward.
Overall: 10/10 would go to Rob for more mini-events and even full events
Which Event: Mini-event - The Line between Faith and Falling
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Very quick- a lot quicker than I could hope for.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): N/A
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): It was short, as it was a mini-event, but for a faith-related event hinging on personal sorrow, the ties one makes with others and how even care and concern for others can be a detriment to oneself- such like the man whose life is dedicated to helping and being concerned for others- it was a wonderful event that played to the key points of the crisis in question.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): N/A, but I will say, the personal development that led to his outcome in faith was a great reward.
Overall: 10/10 would go to Rob for more mini-events and even full events