OhverrideSmonk DM?!?!?
#1
Event Prefs: Listen, I'll do small events, I'll do big events. I just request patience since I'm new.
Discord: Big Smonk (ohverride)

Right, so. I'm new to this whole jazz. I've gotten some encouragement, and frankly, this whole thing is looooong overdue. Long overdue. I'll need to accrue resources like sprites, get used to the commands, find the sweet spot in stats, but if you're patient and comfortable with me experimenting a bit? I'll try and make it as fun and fulfilling as possible.

Also, due to circumstances in the past, I WILL be providing certain select folk event priority.

If you've run something for me before and need an event, you can put me on the phone. You know who you are. This is my way of paying you back.

I will try my darndest to make it fun - SEND ME THINE EVENTS!
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#2
Character: Ult 
Which Event: First Seed 

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Fast narrations! 10/10
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The battles was amazing and challenging and the puzzle was cool as well 10/10
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): The story of the event was cool to and I loved it 10/10
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): I jumped into the void and got hurt from it I'd say it was fair and I got a new pair of kicks. 10/10

Overall: 10/10  Great event!

Any other comments: Ult haves learnt that reading books does in fact make one grow their power and will not make fun of another book reader again. 10/10 would jump into the void again.
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#3
Character: Zen Mugen
Which Event: First Seed 

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Was pretty fast, no issues there!
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): Everything was balanced! It was thrilling and challenging and would 100% want to do it again if granted the chance!
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): The story was written well, had me engaged from start to finish!
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): Punishments were fair!

Overall: 10/10

Any other comments: I'm not going to lie, the fight with the void Beast was one of the most fun I've ever had. There was last hit moments that had me on the edge of my seat. Look forward to having events with this dm in the future!
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#4
Character: Eyihl
Which Event: First Seed

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): It was fast, yes! Sometimes it took a little while, but nothing too much - mostly because they were finishing to deal with map things, as far as I'm aware.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The battles were fuuuuun- and made me squirm in DESPAIR, as well- so, this works? I would maaaybe say to expand the scenario a bit on puzzles (because I am a pea brain to those things, but you probably noticed that)!
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): I AM HAPPY
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): I SQUIRMED AT EVERY FIGHT BUT I LOVED SO MUCH THE ITEM I GOT- I would glob all the risks again with all my might. I HAVE NO REGRETS.

Overall: I feel like you did pretty well, especially considering that you're getting used to everything, and I hope we can do an event together again!!!

Any other comments: I appreciate that you had enough presence of spirit to not personally strangle my character..... in all battles. <3
I felt that you're very easygoing in all our interactions and it made me feel comfortable; I believe this is pretty important, as well :>
ANDDD- The mechanic of the dolls were something pretty interesting, and I AM SAD that I don't have'em anymore. BUT I WILL TRY TO GET OVER IT.... maybe.
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#5
Character: Rosemary Okabe
Which Event: The Cathedral of Glinting Shadows
Responsiveness: Very responsive 
Fast narrations! 10/10
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): Holy shit they were good. Mans was trickiest 10/10
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): It was a really good story bases. Kept it interesting and fun.10/10
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): I was the meat shield and got a perm but thats okay! So worth the dev. 10/10

Overall: 10/10  Great event!

Any other comments: The perm was cool asf tho <3
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#6
Character: Leonard Caewynn

Which Event: The Cathedral of Glinting Shadows

Responsiveness: Very responsive. He actually responded so fast to us that I was wondering how the F he was doing so.

Balance: Good battles, specially the very last one. Felt like a true challenge.

Storytelling: Due to the pacing (Players had to AFK quite a lot mid event) I felt a bit disconnected to the storytelling at by the middle of it, but it was NOT his fault at all. What he showed and how he did so was pretty good.

Fairness: Very fair. The puzzle wasn't hard, we were just dumb. And the rewards were creative for the things we faced.

Overall: Good DM, incredibly fast with responses and the event as a whole. 9/10 because I had a slight feeling that he didn't prepare for players trying to go through things that he had not written down for the story, but I might be incorrect. I recommend him.
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#7

Character:
 
Seraphina Vexillia

Which Event: The Cathedral of Glinting Shadows
Responsiveness: He was incredibly fast. Like to a superhuman degree. This man is a beast.
Balance: First battle felt like we totally steamrolled him, but the second battle really showcased he was just giving us false hope. The final boss battle could have killed us, but this was a high CoD so it was QUALITY.
Storytelling: The storytelling was on point. If it wasn’t for the constant interruptions irl I would have felt more connected to it. Not at the fault of the DM.
Fairness: Very fair. I’m bad at puzzles and although I struggled with it. Still glad it was in there. Battles were good fairness and the rewards we got from said battles were quite interesting.
Overall: Very good DM. Glad he was chosen to run this event as his storytelling was incredibly well put together and the balance felt just right. My only gripe is that it feels like he had a very set storyline and it couldn’t be altered slightly depending on various factors IC because he had a script to follow. Also he made it so that when defeating enemies, he kind of wrote how we defeated them behalf of our characters rather than allowed us to create an interesting narrative around how we beat them in our writing. 9/10.
(Sorry for the long wait for this review!)
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#8
Character: Melos Equisol

Event: Goblin's Hoard.

Responsiveness: 10/10 We'd barely finish responding to one narration before the next was posted.

Balance: Stellar, the fights were absolutely balanced too perfectly. 10/10

Storytelling: Excellent, introduced some lore about a goblin hoard - their traps, and their trapped pets. I think with such a limited concept, they've introduced quite the fun story. 10/10

Overall: 10/10 - I wasn't part of the original crew, added due to two people disappearing right before the event started and it felt so natural and interesting that I loved every minute of it! Very good, would be enslav- contacting Smonk for an event soon.
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