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Quote:Key: PotayoEC
Event Preferences: ALL ( I honestly do that because I love improvising, so I can stop rebirthing characters. I also love helping people. )
Contact Information: Astronomique#1754 (Discord)
Anything Else: I'm a new DM, so I might be doing some mistakes here and here. Don't be scared to be honest with me, it's always been with honesty I've learned better.



If you want to tell me if I was a good boy:


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Which Event:

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?):
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?):
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?)

Overall:

Any other comments:
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Key/Character: Dragmire Ruinfall
Which Event: Descent Unto Darkness

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 9/10, little to no waiting around.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 7/10. It was a fairly brief, short story, but not bad for a beginning to start from.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 6/10, while the theme was good, it was far too short.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) 8/10

Overall: 7/10

Any other comments: Would highly recommend trying to flesh out story and detail more in future events, because while theme was good - It clearly wasn't thought out beyond a brawl.
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