11-17-2023, 10:39 PM
Approved with the following changes(bolded)!
Ax – The Char of Yggdrasil
At first glance this charred branch appears to be nothing more than that, a piece of petrified wood lined with surging remains of fiery magic from the destruction that consumed the lands. On closer examination, however, the truth will be seen. Beneath the hardened exterior and traces of fire, leylines of magic can be felt beneath in this ancient branch. No an ordinary piece of wood, but a carefully collected piece of Yggdrasil. A single branch that held the inherent power of the Tree of Life deep within its core.
(Grade B)
Raian – Fracture of Elaide’s Beast
One of the many bones of beasts of old that had fallen upon the battlefield, this femur stands as tall as the leg of an average sized man, simply a piece of a monstrous creature that once brought upon the destruction of the Astyan Empire. An aura of strength emanates from the bone, residual power of the monster that once walked upon it residing within the bone itself. The destiny of the wielder of the bone is clear, to become a dominating force of strength; it was simply up to the one who bore the bone to decide whether that strength would be used for the good of Malziel or the evil of Amalia.
Change to Grade C
Cyril – Shard of Avalon
In a land of darkness where nothing has been left but ash and bone, this shard was uncovered from beneath the mounds of soot thanks to its pure and radiant light. To hold this shard left behind by the miracle performed to save the people of the Astyan empire is to feel the power of the celestial themselves. Imbedded within this tiny crystalline shard is the potential to grow in power and to unlock its potent grace to ascend into a state greater than oneself. To pull at the secrets of blood, body, and mind to help the wielder become who they wish to be bathed in holy light.
Change to Grade C & Remove Avalon reference
Akroma – Miracle of Malziel
In the very location that Mikhael Petrakis knelt and made his plea to the heavens centuries ago, this tablet was uncovered at the base of the ruins of the final tower of the Empire of Astya. This smooth and polished stone has sat containing the story of Mikhael’s plea and Malziel’s miracle since it was first performed, the tablet left behind as a reminder of what occurs when humanity allows too much evil to prevail.
When touched by those with a trace of the angel’s divinity within their blood, the tablet reveals a prophecy foretold once to those lost in the darkness without light, and now again for the descendent of the angel-blooded King.
“When it’s darkest, see the stars. Their light is the hopes and dreams of the unborn, the love of the lost ones. Remember that you are alive and witness them.
There will come another with the King’s blood in his veins, who proudly claims the Petrakis name. He will take back what has been lost.”
Remove the grade here since it isn't a material.
Ax – The Char of Yggdrasil
At first glance this charred branch appears to be nothing more than that, a piece of petrified wood lined with surging remains of fiery magic from the destruction that consumed the lands. On closer examination, however, the truth will be seen. Beneath the hardened exterior and traces of fire, leylines of magic can be felt beneath in this ancient branch. No an ordinary piece of wood, but a carefully collected piece of Yggdrasil. A single branch that held the inherent power of the Tree of Life deep within its core.
(Grade B)
Raian – Fracture of Elaide’s Beast
One of the many bones of beasts of old that had fallen upon the battlefield, this femur stands as tall as the leg of an average sized man, simply a piece of a monstrous creature that once brought upon the destruction of the Astyan Empire. An aura of strength emanates from the bone, residual power of the monster that once walked upon it residing within the bone itself. The destiny of the wielder of the bone is clear, to become a dominating force of strength; it was simply up to the one who bore the bone to decide whether that strength would be used for the good of Malziel or the evil of Amalia.
Change to Grade C
Cyril – Shard of Avalon
In a land of darkness where nothing has been left but ash and bone, this shard was uncovered from beneath the mounds of soot thanks to its pure and radiant light. To hold this shard left behind by the miracle performed to save the people of the Astyan empire is to feel the power of the celestial themselves. Imbedded within this tiny crystalline shard is the potential to grow in power and to unlock its potent grace to ascend into a state greater than oneself. To pull at the secrets of blood, body, and mind to help the wielder become who they wish to be bathed in holy light.
Change to Grade C & Remove Avalon reference
Akroma – Miracle of Malziel
In the very location that Mikhael Petrakis knelt and made his plea to the heavens centuries ago, this tablet was uncovered at the base of the ruins of the final tower of the Empire of Astya. This smooth and polished stone has sat containing the story of Mikhael’s plea and Malziel’s miracle since it was first performed, the tablet left behind as a reminder of what occurs when humanity allows too much evil to prevail.
When touched by those with a trace of the angel’s divinity within their blood, the tablet reveals a prophecy foretold once to those lost in the darkness without light, and now again for the descendent of the angel-blooded King.
“When it’s darkest, see the stars. Their light is the hopes and dreams of the unborn, the love of the lost ones. Remember that you are alive and witness them.
There will come another with the King’s blood in his veins, who proudly claims the Petrakis name. He will take back what has been lost.”
Remove the grade here since it isn't a material.