Crinter DM:

[Bluebird]

Key/Character: Nanashi
Which Event: Hunt for the Past

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 10/10
As usual, the time in between posts and narration was ideal and fast paced. We had a few moments where we were allowed a breather, but overall the pace of the story was moving at a wonderful speed.

Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 9/10
i deducted a point for it because of the void eyes silliness but otherwise as previous it didn't feel like an insurmountable challenge; rather, the balance seemed equal to the type of task we were doing and the type of enemies we were fighting.

Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 10/10
as this was a character-based story telling, it was pretty centric on one: but it was a good experience and development for those involved in the event. it honestly kinda felt like a d&d campaign as noted previously, which is a REALLY good thing imo. we had choices and options and whichever one we picked would lead us to a different situation. there was a comedic relief moment that served as a breather before we got our ass handed to us, and our first interaction when we spawned in truly set in depth the type of enemy we were facing. storylines intertwined, and the conclusion was wonderful.

Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) 10/10
mal dm is fun dm
you will have a good time with rewards equal to what you do and what you overcome
you will get dev.

Overall: 10/10

Any other comments: why did you have to kill shopkeeper john man
he couldve lived... anyone but him...