01-14-2020, 10:00 PM
Key/Character: Dragmire Ruinfall
Which Event: Descent Unto Darkness
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 9/10, little to no waiting around.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 7/10. It was a fairly brief, short story, but not bad for a beginning to start from.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 6/10, while the theme was good, it was far too short.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) 8/10
Overall: 7/10
Any other comments: Would highly recommend trying to flesh out story and detail more in future events, because while theme was good - It clearly wasn't thought out beyond a brawl.
Which Event: Descent Unto Darkness
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 9/10, little to no waiting around.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 7/10. It was a fairly brief, short story, but not bad for a beginning to start from.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 6/10, while the theme was good, it was far too short.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) 8/10
Overall: 7/10
Any other comments: Would highly recommend trying to flesh out story and detail more in future events, because while theme was good - It clearly wasn't thought out beyond a brawl.