12-25-2019, 05:26 AM
Key/Character: Andras
Which Event: Blood-in and Blood-out!
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Very fast responsiveness, it was refreshing!
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): There were a bit -too- many battles against NPC's. I'd suggest more RPB oriented ones, and to have the damage on them toned down a bit. The HP bit was great, but the damage needs to be monitored carefully.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): The Story-telling and trigger warnings were much appreciated! I felt really immersed and would attend another event again.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) : The fairness was pretty solid, as well! As stated before, maybe a few less fights, but great job!!
Overall: Excellent! You have a bright future in dming, and I like the enthusiasm you placed into doing all of this. Great story-telling, and you did a great job at making it feel grimdarkish.
Any other comments: Keep up the good work, and maintain this quality of content!
Which Event: Blood-in and Blood-out!
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Very fast responsiveness, it was refreshing!
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): There were a bit -too- many battles against NPC's. I'd suggest more RPB oriented ones, and to have the damage on them toned down a bit. The HP bit was great, but the damage needs to be monitored carefully.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): The Story-telling and trigger warnings were much appreciated! I felt really immersed and would attend another event again.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) : The fairness was pretty solid, as well! As stated before, maybe a few less fights, but great job!!
Overall: Excellent! You have a bright future in dming, and I like the enthusiasm you placed into doing all of this. Great story-telling, and you did a great job at making it feel grimdarkish.
Any other comments: Keep up the good work, and maintain this quality of content!