01-28-2021, 02:53 AM
Key/Character: InThePooPoo/Cortado
Event: The Holy Land
Responsiveness: Good, but sometimes drawn out. 8/10
Balance: Excellent, no complaints whatsoever. 10/10
Storytelling: Wonderful narrations, detailed and with plenty of choices and branching paths. The only complaint I have is a personal gripe with events that have too many branches and miss-able pieces to them. It seemed very obscure to me, the way the event was laid out, and what we should have done. I think that was part of the reason the event took so long. Either way, it was still very strong and solid. 9/10
Fairness: I'm sure it's due to how tired I was, but it really didn't seem clear when there was a potential for a reward. I basically took an injury for an innocuous decision (picking a flower), and didn't receive much encouragement to continue on with what I was doing. This was the only thing that really stood out to me that could be improved upon - and for the most part, every other encounter made sense and was very clear. Still, though, I'll need to dock a few points for that, just because my monkey brain couldn't handle it. 7/10
Overall: 8/10 - and the -2 is only due to my own personal gripes. Fantastic DM from objective standards.
Event: The Holy Land
Responsiveness: Good, but sometimes drawn out. 8/10
Balance: Excellent, no complaints whatsoever. 10/10
Storytelling: Wonderful narrations, detailed and with plenty of choices and branching paths. The only complaint I have is a personal gripe with events that have too many branches and miss-able pieces to them. It seemed very obscure to me, the way the event was laid out, and what we should have done. I think that was part of the reason the event took so long. Either way, it was still very strong and solid. 9/10
Fairness: I'm sure it's due to how tired I was, but it really didn't seem clear when there was a potential for a reward. I basically took an injury for an innocuous decision (picking a flower), and didn't receive much encouragement to continue on with what I was doing. This was the only thing that really stood out to me that could be improved upon - and for the most part, every other encounter made sense and was very clear. Still, though, I'll need to dock a few points for that, just because my monkey brain couldn't handle it. 7/10
Overall: 8/10 - and the -2 is only due to my own personal gripes. Fantastic DM from objective standards.