io DM

[Potayo]

Key/Character: Potayo/Myrin

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Event: Creating the shards of the stars. (turned wrong)

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Responsiveness: 10/10 It was quick for well written post. You have a good writing, honestly. It was immersive for a public event and you knew how to keep that same balance from the beginning to the end. Good job.

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Balance: Well done. Not too many people were down. 10/10

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Storytelling: Again I-O, you have an amazing writing and no one can take that from you. I had fun even though I am tired from my working day.10/10

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Addition: It is where I will be honest and give tips from past experiences. Make sure to create lines so players will have their rewards one after the other. Like that, you are certain no one is forgotten. You could use flags as an example, it's a tip from Avajain. Otherwise? You are all good and you did amazing for something that is known to be difficult to host. 8/10

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Overall: Good job. All my homies says you're a good DM. 9/10