06-11-2020, 05:26 AM
Key/Character: Kole Tsuyoi
Which Event: The Grand Hunt of Los'tal
Responsiveness: Pretyping some RPs is never a bad thing to do before an event, and when the time comes to posting it, just make some quick adjustments during the scenes. Especially with the long story based RPs, it's always good to have that at the ready so you don't have your players just sitting idly by waiting 10 minutes for a single story driven rp. Sure, make little rps here and there off the top of your head based on the players rp, though, when it gets to something juicy, that's the kind of stuff you want pretyped. Though, Brahms did do a good job at trying to make sense of what was around him, his coordination at going back and forth between players was decent, though, they could work a bit more on including more of everyone's rp in their narration except one particular person.
Storytelling: It had a lot of quaky and comedic moments within it. Sure there were times when the players made a joke out of a serious situation, but how else were we supposed to get out of there without actually fighting? It showed us to be creative with our RPs, and to use every bit of the environment around us to our advantage. As far as the major storytelling goes, it reminded me a lot of a Dark Fantasy Novel, And, a bit of Dark souls as far as the pacing and the narration. All in all, Brahms is really creative, and I look forward to seeing more from them later down the line.
Fairness: It was a risk match reward thing, we weren't really going after something big besides the egg, so the risk for that was understandable, as for the others? It was fair.
Overall: It honestly was one the most unique events I have ever been on. The amount of sheer dedication that was put in? Was interesting, and really something to keep watching out for as Brahms DMng continues in the future. I had a lot of fun, and my friends did too, hopefully next time I'll see something new as far as narration and such goes, overall, very creative.
Other Comments: KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRAHMS!
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Which Event: The Grand Hunt of Los'tal
Responsiveness: Pretyping some RPs is never a bad thing to do before an event, and when the time comes to posting it, just make some quick adjustments during the scenes. Especially with the long story based RPs, it's always good to have that at the ready so you don't have your players just sitting idly by waiting 10 minutes for a single story driven rp. Sure, make little rps here and there off the top of your head based on the players rp, though, when it gets to something juicy, that's the kind of stuff you want pretyped. Though, Brahms did do a good job at trying to make sense of what was around him, his coordination at going back and forth between players was decent, though, they could work a bit more on including more of everyone's rp in their narration except one particular person.
Storytelling: It had a lot of quaky and comedic moments within it. Sure there were times when the players made a joke out of a serious situation, but how else were we supposed to get out of there without actually fighting? It showed us to be creative with our RPs, and to use every bit of the environment around us to our advantage. As far as the major storytelling goes, it reminded me a lot of a Dark Fantasy Novel, And, a bit of Dark souls as far as the pacing and the narration. All in all, Brahms is really creative, and I look forward to seeing more from them later down the line.
Fairness: It was a risk match reward thing, we weren't really going after something big besides the egg, so the risk for that was understandable, as for the others? It was fair.
Overall: It honestly was one the most unique events I have ever been on. The amount of sheer dedication that was put in? Was interesting, and really something to keep watching out for as Brahms DMng continues in the future. I had a lot of fun, and my friends did too, hopefully next time I'll see something new as far as narration and such goes, overall, very creative.
Other Comments: KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRAHMS!