Key/Character: Zefa Forger/Potayo
Which event: A quest for a second chance.
Responsiveness: As much as it was quick, the narrations were short and immersive. Except at the end, but at this point it does not matter, i'll tell you why soon. 10/10 on that man.
Balance: Regarding that, you truly could have done better. But as a DM myself, I can express how difficult it can be. Even for a CoI, the first boss felt like beating up a NPC, whilst the second one was fire!!! The last boss truly gave me a dark souls vibe, it was very immersive. Good job on that! 7/10
Storytelling: It was single handily the best event I have found myself into. It was lively, well pictured and everything tied so well together and you have adapted incredibly well even if something else I won't mention happened. As much as it was sad, it truly have adapted well.
You painted the air and you gave in a taste. It really had some darksouls vibe here. And here comes my review regarding the last narrations. I am not quite certain of who you have taken to roleplay your EC, but they roleplay extremely well and they gave me such a fruitful and immersive dev.
You gave us many opportunities to walk in many different paths and it didn't felt forced. Because when a DM begins to force things to much, it kinds of break the immersion and it gives me headaches. A big 10/10 on that man. I was about to give 9/10, but there are things that happened and it was far from being your fault.
Fairness: You gave us amazing dev items for a simple CoI event and even an amazing experience, you can trust me that I will throw that event in my application. 10/10
Overall: 8/10- It's a decent note regarding the little things that happened between the event. The bugs and something else i will not tell.
Note: It was unironically the best event I have ever done. I am not sure if it's because I am more invested in that character then my last ones, but honestly. You really deserve my admiration for that work and I can tell that I have myself learned a lot from that event so I can improve my DMing.
Which event: A quest for a second chance.
Responsiveness: As much as it was quick, the narrations were short and immersive. Except at the end, but at this point it does not matter, i'll tell you why soon. 10/10 on that man.
Balance: Regarding that, you truly could have done better. But as a DM myself, I can express how difficult it can be. Even for a CoI, the first boss felt like beating up a NPC, whilst the second one was fire!!! The last boss truly gave me a dark souls vibe, it was very immersive. Good job on that! 7/10
Storytelling: It was single handily the best event I have found myself into. It was lively, well pictured and everything tied so well together and you have adapted incredibly well even if something else I won't mention happened. As much as it was sad, it truly have adapted well.
You painted the air and you gave in a taste. It really had some darksouls vibe here. And here comes my review regarding the last narrations. I am not quite certain of who you have taken to roleplay your EC, but they roleplay extremely well and they gave me such a fruitful and immersive dev.
You gave us many opportunities to walk in many different paths and it didn't felt forced. Because when a DM begins to force things to much, it kinds of break the immersion and it gives me headaches. A big 10/10 on that man. I was about to give 9/10, but there are things that happened and it was far from being your fault.
Fairness: You gave us amazing dev items for a simple CoI event and even an amazing experience, you can trust me that I will throw that event in my application. 10/10
Overall: 8/10- It's a decent note regarding the little things that happened between the event. The bugs and something else i will not tell.
Note: It was unironically the best event I have ever done. I am not sure if it's because I am more invested in that character then my last ones, but honestly. You really deserve my admiration for that work and I can tell that I have myself learned a lot from that event so I can improve my DMing.
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