05-26-2020, 05:38 AM
Key/Character: caledflwch / odin ras petrakis
Which Event: the grand clock
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 10/10 i tried to draw a meme picture about "kill em all 2040284 dead birds - grey" but while i was getting my tablet set up they had already posted
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 7/10 battle was great even if i lagged really hard and was across the planet every time i got scrambled, puzzle was cool though it sort of was a one-person thing, admittedly i let the one person go and do it, but mostly because i didn't want to take their spotlight and also didnt really know how i would have contributed to the clock puzzle anyway
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 10/10 hell yea this was a story, i dont know the context of like any of it but it was super grand and the Revelation sure has added a lot of development to me
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) 9.9/10 enchant my staff next time vermin
Overall: :mouse: 9.9(repeating)/10
Any other comments: tick tock
Which Event: the grand clock
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 10/10 i tried to draw a meme picture about "kill em all 2040284 dead birds - grey" but while i was getting my tablet set up they had already posted
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 7/10 battle was great even if i lagged really hard and was across the planet every time i got scrambled, puzzle was cool though it sort of was a one-person thing, admittedly i let the one person go and do it, but mostly because i didn't want to take their spotlight and also didnt really know how i would have contributed to the clock puzzle anyway
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 10/10 hell yea this was a story, i dont know the context of like any of it but it was super grand and the Revelation sure has added a lot of development to me
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) 9.9/10 enchant my staff next time vermin
Overall: :mouse: 9.9(repeating)/10
Any other comments: tick tock