05-27-2024, 11:41 PM
Character: Magnolia
Event: Sisters and Witnesses Three
As another has said already: 'easily the best public event I've ever attended'
Writing, Characterization, Sequences, Detail, Lore Exposition, Etc. Wow!!!
This was a fairly long event chain, yet everything about it composed well together to a great meaning & message. My character's role in it was more akin to a witness & observer, but through it all there was an incredible weight to it all. A great story told, that I think I would best liken to an orchestral soundtrack with the highs and lows.
A smol critique
The final event was long. It was very, very long. I think it is very important to look into ways to condense the content a bit, especially when dealing with such a large quantity of players. Posts that require a lot of depth take a long time to write, which can cause very long waiting periods. In itself, this isn't bad, but mental exhaustion starts to wear itself heavy, which is particularly problematic for climaxes, or IRL responsibilities.
Overall?
(numeric grading is wack)
Wahoo!/Wahoo!
Event: Sisters and Witnesses Three
As another has said already: 'easily the best public event I've ever attended'
Writing, Characterization, Sequences, Detail, Lore Exposition, Etc. Wow!!!
This was a fairly long event chain, yet everything about it composed well together to a great meaning & message. My character's role in it was more akin to a witness & observer, but through it all there was an incredible weight to it all. A great story told, that I think I would best liken to an orchestral soundtrack with the highs and lows.
A smol critique
The final event was long. It was very, very long. I think it is very important to look into ways to condense the content a bit, especially when dealing with such a large quantity of players. Posts that require a lot of depth take a long time to write, which can cause very long waiting periods. In itself, this isn't bad, but mental exhaustion starts to wear itself heavy, which is particularly problematic for climaxes, or IRL responsibilities.
Overall?
(numeric grading is wack)
Wahoo!/Wahoo!