04-12-2020, 05:31 PM
Key/Character:MutesToCry/ Xyth
Which Event: On a search for the needed
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): There were a little slow, but thats what happens when a cat spills soda on him.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The obstacles were fun and the battles were somewhat alright. Though there was one issue, but it was just a tasting thing.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): The story was nice, simple, but over all the description of the house would have been lovely.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): I would say the injuries that I caused onmyself (Basically trying to be a cool guy) were fair. A simple arm break 4 day temp is fine for my stupidity. Though I didn't like the fact of having to get an additional Temp for losing a single round out of a 5 round match. I went down once, on round 3 and then won round for, yet Im punished by a side-admin assisting the event. Though Its only for a day, so not much to complain past that really.
Overall: 9.5/10
Any other comments: Would love to have more events made by this guy. He makes the Event plans quick and is super nice really.
Which Event: On a search for the needed
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): There were a little slow, but thats what happens when a cat spills soda on him.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The obstacles were fun and the battles were somewhat alright. Though there was one issue, but it was just a tasting thing.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): The story was nice, simple, but over all the description of the house would have been lovely.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): I would say the injuries that I caused onmyself (Basically trying to be a cool guy) were fair. A simple arm break 4 day temp is fine for my stupidity. Though I didn't like the fact of having to get an additional Temp for losing a single round out of a 5 round match. I went down once, on round 3 and then won round for, yet Im punished by a side-admin assisting the event. Though Its only for a day, so not much to complain past that really.
Overall: 9.5/10
Any other comments: Would love to have more events made by this guy. He makes the Event plans quick and is super nice really.